
雅思写作避免中式英语,核心是 “摆脱中式思维 + 积累地道表达 + 刻意仿写”,聚焦 “固定搭配准确、句式符合英文逻辑、表达简洁自然”,具体方法如下:
1. 拒绝 “逐字翻译”,按英文思维重构表达
中式英语的核心问题是 “中文句式直译”,比如 “我认为这个观点不对” 直译 “I think this view is not right”,地道表达应为 “I disagree with this view” 或 “This argument is flawed”。
遇到中文表达,先想 “英文习惯怎么说”,而非逐词对应:
中式直译:improve English level(提升英语水平)→ 地道表达:improve English(level 多余,improve 直接搭配语言)
中式直译:people's living standard is more and more high → 地道表达:people's living standards are increasingly high 或 have been rising steadily
2. 积累 “地道固定搭配”,替代中式自创
按话题分类记固定搭配(避免按中文逻辑造搭配),重点积累:
教育类:acquire knowledge(获取知识)、broaden horizons(开阔眼界)、cultivate skills(培养技能)
环境类:address pollution(解决污染)、preserve the environment(保护环境)、reduce carbon emissions(减少碳排放)
科技类:boost efficiency(提升效率)、facilitate communication(促进沟通)、pose a threat(构成威胁)
避免 “动词 + 名词” 的中式搭配,比如 “做决定” 不用 “do a decision”,用 “make a decision”;“关注问题” 不用 “pay attention to the problem” 的简单表达,可进阶用 “focus on the issue” 或 “tackle the problem”。
3. 优化句式结构,符合英文表达逻辑
英文多 “主谓宾” 核心清晰,中文多 “流水句”,写作时避免一句话堆砌多个动词:
中式句式:Many people go to big cities, they want to find better jobs.(两个主句无连接词)→ 地道表达:Many people move to big cities to find better jobs.(用不定式表目的)或 Many people who move to big cities aim to find better jobs.(用定语从句衔接)
减少 “there be”“it is” 的过度使用,适当用主动语态增强简洁性:
中式表达:There are many people who support this policy. → 地道表达:Many people support this policy.
避免 “形容词 + 名词” 的重复修饰,英文更倾向用词汇:
中式表达:very big success(非常大的成功)→ 地道表达:great success 或 remarkable success
4. 刻意仿写 + 对比纠错,固化地道表达
仿写 7 分及以上范文的核心句式和搭配,比如范文 “Online learning has revolutionized the way people acquire knowledge”,替换话题词仿写:“Renewable energy has transformed the way countries meet their energy needs”。
建立 “中式英语 vs 地道表达” 对照清单,每次练习后对照修正:
中式:In my opinion, I think... → 地道:In my opinion... 或 I think...(重复冗余)
中式:We should take measures to solve this problem. → 地道:We should take measures to address this issue.(solve problem 虽可用,但 address issue 更地道)
借助工具辅助检查,用 Grammarly 或剑桥真题范文对比,标记 “读起来别扭” 的表达,查找地道替代方案。
5. 积累 “话题高频地道词”,替代基础中文对应词
不用简单中文对应词,用话题高频地道表达:
好:good → beneficial(有益的)、advantageous(有利的)、constructive(有建设性的)
重要:important → essential(必要的)、paramount(至关重要的)、crucial(关键的)
解决:solve → address(处理)、tackle(应对)、resolve(解决,侧重矛盾)