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提高雅思写作技巧一：
避免空洞的单词和词组
1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered,
young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of
their parents,in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when
all things are considered”和“
in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their
parents.
2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to
help their parents，
they did not have the options that young people have at this point
in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their
parents,
they did not have the options that young people have
now.
提高雅思写作技巧二：
避免重复
1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in
size.
large
对一个
farm
来说就是
size
方面的
large,
所以
in size
可以去掉，
改为：The
farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
