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句子不连贯

Run-on sentences are sentences that:

不连贯句子指的是：

1)are not connected by appropriate linking language such as conjunctions

缺乏合适的连接词，例如连词。

2)use too many clauses rather than using periods and linking language such as conjunctive adverbs

使用过多的从句，而非句号和连接语，例如连接副词

The first type leaves out a word-usually a conjunction-that is required to connect a dependent and independent clause.For example:

种是漏掉了一个词——通常是连接词——用于连接非独立子句和独立子句。

The students did well on the test they didn't study very much.

学生们考得很好他们没有下多少功夫。

Anna needs a new car she spent the weekend visiting car dealerships.

安娜想买辆新车她整个周末都在约见代理商。

The first sentence should use either a conjunction'but',or'yet'or a subordinating conjunction'although,even though,or though'to connect the sentence.In the second sentence,the conjunction'so'or the subordinating conjunction'since,as,or because'would connect the two clauses.

句话要么应该加上一个连词but，要么加上yet，或者一个从属连词although,even though或though来连接前后两句。

The students did well,yet they didn't study very much.

学生们考得很好，但他们并没有下多少功夫。

Anna spent the weekend visiting car dealerships since she needs a new car.

因为想买辆新车，安娜整个周末都在约见代理商。

Another common run on sentence occurs when using too many clauses.This often occurs using the word'and'.

另一种句子不连贯发生在使用太多从句的时候。常常是由于and一词导致。

We went to the store and bought some fruit,and we went to the mall to get some clothes,and we had lunch at McDonald's,and we visited some friends.

我们去商店买了一些水果，去购物商城买了一些衣服，在麦当劳吃的午饭，又见了一些朋友。

The continuous chain of clauses using'and'should be avoided.In general,do not write sentences that contain more than three clauses to ensure that your sentences do not become run-on sentences.

我们应该避免使用and来连接一大串的从句。一般来说，从句不要超过三个，以确保句子的连贯性。

Duplicate Subjects

两个主语

Sometimes students use a pronoun as a duplicate subject.

有时候，学生们会将代词作为第二个主语。

Remember that each clause takes only one sentence.If you have mentioned the subject of a sentence by name,there is no need to repeat with a pronoun.

记住，每个从句只需要一句话。如果之前你已经提到主语的名字，就不需要再用代词重复了。

Example 1:

例一：

Tom lives in Los Angeles.

汤姆住在洛杉矶。

NOT

而不是

Tom,he lives in Lost Angeles.

汤姆，他住在旧金山。

Example 2:

例二：

The students come from Vietnam.

学生们来自越南。

NOT

而不是

The students they come from Vietnam.

学生们他们来自越南。

Incorrect Tense