想要知道提高雅思写作成绩的秘诀是什么,就需要先知道雅思写作低分的规律是什么。雅思写作较容易出低分的两种情况:
种:严重跑题;逻辑混乱;词汇匮乏;句型单一,以上四种问题共存的时候,分数不高应该不奇怪;
第二种:背模板,套用模版写作。
有的同学可能会问,为啥用模版得低分呢?原因很简单,你认为很好的模版,在阅卷无数的考官眼里都是千篇一律。不客气的说,愿意用模版的学生,是想走捷径不肯真正付出的学生,用模版教学的老师是个不成熟的老师。

那么,真正有效的在短期内提高雅思写作成绩的秘诀是什么呢?一句话,首先就是中英思维方式的转变。
一、汉英宏观上思维方式的差异
1.英语的思维模式是直线式的.直接的,其特征可归纳为三个步骤:
1)Say what you're going to say.
2)Say it.
3)Then say what you've said.
比如:
a.Many workers are seduced by rosy illusions of life as a telecommuter.A computer programmer from New York City moves to the tranquil Adirondack Mountains and stays in contact with her office via computer.A manager comes into his office three days a week and works at home the other two.An accountant stays home to care for her sick child;she hooks up her telephone modem connections and does office work between calls to the doctor.
解析:上段中,句为“ic sentence”,“很多人都向往美好的远程办公生活”,即“Say what you're going to say.”后面列举了3个例子来支撑句,即Say it.
2.汉语的思维模式是曲线式的,间接的,其特征可用成语“画龙”来概括,即大量的笔墨用在铺垫,陈述上,较后才摆出自己的观点。
比如:
Definition of College Education
College is an institution of higher learning that gives degrees.All of us needed culture and education in life,if no education to us,we should go living hell.One of the greatest causes that while other animals have remained as they first man along has made such rapid progress is has learned about civilization.The improvement of the highest civilization is in order to education up-to-date.So college education is a very important thing which we don't need mention about it.(文中错误是原文中存在的)
解析:这为典型的中式写法。前文用大量的铺垫来说理,较后得出结论“大学教育很重要,我们没必要再提及”