反驳段：论据和例证展开证明作家立场
For a start,working,even though we take less interest in,by occupying time so constructively,makes one contented and with no time for boredom.Besides,many benefits ensue,securing a job enables one to be independent both economically and spiritually.To be the bread-winner of the family not only brings about personal sense of security but also effectively harmonize family relationship because a stable job is,to many parents,a kind of spiritual consolation.Plus,one has better personal resources to draw on by taking up a job,a well-connected interpersonal relationship is definitely an indispensable source of well-being.My personal story could justify my stand,I,originally,have no alternative but to work as a freelance English teacher though my dream career is a professional self-traveler,however,the sense of career fulfillment gradually grew on me when my painstaking efforts helped many ambitious young adults realize their dreams.Most importantly,my circle of friends has been greatly enlarged.
1.Working，by occupying time so constructively,makes one contented and with no time for boredom.因为工作填满了时间的空隙，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感。
2.One has better personal resources to draw on by taking up a job工作使人拥有良好的人脉资源。
3.A well-connected interpersonal relationship is definitely an indispensable source of well-being.良好的人际关系是幸福不可缺少的源泉。
让步段：让步原题观点的合理性+加以反驳
To be sure,I have to concede that it is a success if one can combine personal interest with career choice.After all,interest is the best simulation of work.It is conceivable that our infinite potential could be tapped and our devotion of work could be strengthened if we can zero in on what our hearts desire.By contrast,we might feel a little bit bored and gloomy when we undertake a job only for the purpose earning a decent living.That is why a number of people prefer to be out-of-work rather than reluctantly choose one job that agonizes them.What I want to refute,however,is that a man with great wisdom should,first of all,land a job,then,opt for dream work,and finally carve out his own career if possible.
