论证幸福更加重要的源泉
Notwithstanding all that,there is no definite correlation between the amount of one’s wealth and his or her happiness index.Happiness，sometimes，does not depend on economic success but completely on wholesome physique and mentality.First,happiness lies in health.More precisely,wealth,fame,or status will be of little meaning if one fails to ensure his health.To illustrate,some affluent enterprisers have money to burn,yet,they are basically unhappy due to the deteriorating health condition and huge mental pressure.Further,health ensures career success and family harmony.In other words,health enables one to brave the career challenges energetically and harmonize the family life optimistically.Ultimately,those who enjoy good health must be confident and optimistic,their pleasant characters can help them enlarge circle of friends.The multiplication of close friends will brighten their spirit and sweeten their lives.
翻译：虽然如此，财富和幸福指数没有必然联系，有时候，幸福不取决于经济成就，而是健康的身心。，幸福源自健康。如果一个人失去健康的保障，财富，名誉，地位皆无意义。例如，很多富裕的企业家财力雄厚，但是，由于健康每况愈下，精神压力巨大，他们本质上还是不幸福。另外，健康带来事业成功和家庭和睦。换言之，健康使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战以及乐观地实现家庭的和谐。较后，健康的人多为自信乐观之人，他们性格开朗，因而可以广交朋友，好友的增加可以使他们精神愉悦，生活甜蜜。
尾段：亮明观点+总结理由
In the final analysis,I re-affirm my conviction that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to health,which is more significant.Only by means of owing desirable health condition can we enjoy the lifelong sense of pleasure although wealth sometimes indicates the source of happiness.
翻译：总之，我的立场是幸福不仅仅和经济成功相关联，和其他更加重要的因素相关。虽然财富有时候是幸福的源泉，但是只有拥有健康我们才能享受到绵长的幸福。
